Wednesday, September 8, 2021

The poof from the pot

   THE POOF FROM THE POT

After moving to a new town, the Smith family thinks they found the perfect home. That is until the walls begin to talk, and they learned the house is haunted. The Smith family was very scared and ran to the door, but it was locked. The walls said: THERE IS A SECRET HANDLE TO PULL AND GET OUT OF HERE!!! After the walls said that, all the lights went out. Mr. Smith pressed the light switch and the smith family saw 13 yellow glowing dots floating towards them. When the yellow dots came close enough. The Smith family saw it was 13 black ghosts with glowing yellow eyes. They turned to run from the ghosts, but Mrs. Smith tripped on a box and bats came fluttering out of it. The smith family kept running and locked themselves in a room. The walls said: GOOD JOB, YOU HAVE FOUND THE ROOM WITH THE SECRET HANDLE. The Smith family went around the room to find the secret handle. Mrs. Smith pulled a lamp, nothing happened. Mr. Smith checked under the couch, noting was there. Just then, Mr. Smith saw a bookshelf. All the books on the bookshelf were ok, but one had a hole in it. Mr. Smith pulled the book, it did not come out. He pulled harder and harder. The book came out and all the walls of the castle came crumbling down. Mrs. Smith shouted yay, we are free!!! Just as they took a step to run, the floor vanished. And the Smith family dropped to the ground. They saw a small brown pot and almost nothing else. Mrs. Smith looked in the pot and found a remote. She pressed a button on the remote and one of the walls fell and poof it was gone. After the wall was gone, The Smith family saw a narrow, long passage. Suddenly they heard a poof, and it was from the pot. Lava started pouring out of the pot. The Smith family ran and escaped from the lava and the haunted castle.        


                                                                    THE END


1 comment:

  1. Very Very Imaginative! Loved reading this one. But it ended abruptly. would have loved to read a more complicated climax. Extremely good effort in this one!

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